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Monday, June 30, 2014

A Dozen Favorite Picture Books


by Cynthia Light Brown



The blog post last week by Kitty and her daughters triggered incredible nostalgia. I went down to my lair of picture books that I haven't the heart to give away (I tell my family I'm saving them for grandchildren, but really they're for me). Whittled the hundreds down to dozens, then down to one dozen. One in the middle is the favorite of my middle daughter (now 18 years old, and getting ready to take a gap year in Nepal, so her choice isn't surprising).



Here they are, from younger to older age range:


 

KING BIDGOOD'S IN THE BATHTUB by Audrey Wood, illustrated by Don Wood

 
EACH PEACH PEAR PLUM by Janet and Allan Ahlberg

 
GOTTA GO! GOTTA GO! by Sam Swope, illustrated by Sue Riddle

 
BLUEBERRIES FOR SAL by Robert McCloskey

 
OFFICER BUCKLE AND GLORIA by Peggy Rathmann

 
A BIRTHDAY FOR FRANCES by Russell Hoban, illustrated by Lillian Hoban

 
RED RIDING HOOD retold and illustrated by James Marshall

 
ZOOM AT SEA by Tim Wynne-Jones, illustrated by Eric Beddows* Katie's favorite

 
JACK AND THE BEANSTALK retold and illustrated by Steven Kellogg

 
RAPUNZEL retold and illustrated by Paul O. Zelinsky

 
BABA YAGA AND THE WISE DOLL by Hiawyn Oram, illustrated by Ruth Brown

 
THE MOUSEHOLE CAT by Antonia Barber, illustrated by Nicola Bayley






 If you ask me next week, I might come up with a different set - there are so many wonderful ones. I notice that they all have great writing and illustrations. Wonderful illustrations pull you in - and it's what sells most picture books these days - but great writing keeps you coming back.

Most of these authors and illustrators have many other wonderful books - enjoy!























Monday, May 12, 2014

And the Winners Are... The Best Books for Babies 2014!

Best Books for Babies Committee, 2013 (That's me, 3rd from left in the middle row)
o, without further ado, here is the list, accompanied by the committee's commentary.
Baby Parade

Baby Parade 
Smiling babies and their caretakers promenade through a cheerful landscape that combines realistic elements with unusual patterns and  textures.
Diggers Go

Diggers Go
Energetic paintings of various kinds of heavy equipment stretch across the pages of this sturdy board book accompanied by amusing interpretations of the noises they make.
Farm

Farm
High contrast illustrations present stylized images of familiar animals and objects; slight changes in texture add tactile appeal.
Global Baby Girls
Global Baby Girls
Crisp photos showcase baby girls from around the world who are 'beautiful, strong, bold and bright' and sure to capture the interest of the very youngest listeners.
Good Night, Trucks: A Bedtime Book

Good Night, Trucks: A Bedtime Book
Colorful cartoon-style pictures feature eleven different kinds of trucks, focusing on what they do and where they go at the end of the day.
Cuddle

Cuddle
Soft black-and-white photos of babies face pages that combine playful pastel illustrations with short sentences describing the babies' actions. There are three other books in the Happy Healthy Baby series, Eat, Move and Reach and all four books are recommended.
It's Time to Sleep.
It's Time to Sleep.
Brief and basic, this colorful point-and-say board book shows photos of babies, blankets, books and bears among other familiar items associated with daily activities and bedtime routines.
Maisy's First Colors

Maisy's First Colors
Maisy and her friends enjoy their favorite yummy foods, featured in simple drawings with bright colors and described with brief rhymes.
My Mother Goose: A Collection of Favorite Rhymes, Songs, and Concepts

My Mother Goose: A Collection of Favorite Rhymes, Songs, and Concepts
A treasure trove of traditional rhymes and original content, this collection is decorated with old-fashioned watercolor illustrations.
Thumpy Feet

Thumpy Feet
A goofy-looking orange cat with big green eyes, Thumpy Feet is interested in the same kinds of things that absorb babies' attention: eating, playing, stretching and sleeping.

If you'd like to learn more about these titles, view the archive of past winners, and get tips on selecting books for babies and reading to them, please visit the Best Books for Babies website! You - and the babies you love - will be glad you did.

I'll be back later in the month with tips on writing and illustrating for this discerning (and sometimes persnickety) audience.

One Final Note: If you ever get a chance to serve on an awards committee, grab it! I have learned more about excellence in children's books (for any age, really) from observing and participating in the committee's thoughtful selection process.



Friday, November 22, 2013

Friday Book Reviews: Harold and the Purple Crayon by Crockett Johnson and Journey by Aaron Becker

By Carol Baicker-McKee

I love pairing up picture books when I read to kids - the tension between the two books can generate as much lively discussion as what's in each book. That's the case with the two books I'm reviewing today as another "Something Old, Something New" picture book pairing.

Something Old: Harold and the Purple Crayon by Crockett Johnson (1955)


Johnson's simple but oh-so-appealing and creative book has been in print continuously for the nearly 60 years since it first appeared and routinely appears in top picture book lists - and it's easy to see why. The small volume features a young boy, a purple crayon - and an imagination come to life. Harold takes his purple crayon on a nighttime journey that he creates for himself as he goes. There is tension and humor along with a spare text and equally spare graphic loveliness.

The story is so well loved that it has spawned spinoffs in many media: in addition to the six other Harold books that Johnson created, there are a short film, animations of several of the other Harold titles, a documentary, a thirteen-episode TV series, an iPad app, theater adaptations - and a computer-animated feature film in the works. (It was to have been produced by Maurice Sendak, but following his death, Steven Spielberg has taken over.)

This is a book every child should know - and preferably, own.

Johnson (1906-1977), whose real name was David Johnson Leisk, came to children's books from careers in commercial art and cartooning (he did the popular strip Barnaby - Harold strongly resembles its protagonist). He also illustrated the classic story The Carrot Seed, written by his wife, the renowned children's writer Ruth Krauss. (That's another book every child should know.)

Something New: Journey by Aaron Becker (2013)


Okay, I'm just going to say it. This is the book I hope wins this year's Caldecott. Even though it's yet another book illustrated by a man instead of a woman (and you can read how I feel about that). Even though it's yet another wordless book. Even though it's yet another obvious retelling rather than an original story. It's that breathtakingly gorgeous, that magical, that well done. I want one of the signed giclee prints for Christmas (of the treehouse, of course, if anyone from my family is reading this - though the treehouse doesn't appear in the book). I'll settle for an autographed copy of the book though.


Many reviewers (who shall go unnamed here, but are easy to find with a Google search) have noted the similarity of Journey to Harold and the Purple Crayon - and some have done it in a way that seems to me to imply disdain, as if Becker were stealing an idea and trying to put one over on us. BUT it's a completely obvious homage. Becker borrows images and events from the Harold books and mashes them together in a way that's new while evocative.

Here I've juxtaposed a page from Journey with its inspiration from Harold and the Purple Crayon:

And here's another Journey page with the image from Harold and the Fairy Tale (1956) that surely prompted it:


(Becker also borrows from other well known tales -- such as his use of a near colorless palette in the girl's real world that's supplanted by vivid color in the fantasy world, ala The Wizard of Oz.) He even...

SPOILER ALERT!!!!!

...inserts Harold, complete with purple crayon and its magical abilities, at the end of the story.

If Becker had wanted to hide what he was up to, I'm sure he sure could have been a lot more subtle.

The children's book field is littered with retellings and homages - Journey is nothing new in this respect. They're often vehicles publishers suggest to illustrators, as a way to let them create a book and garner both the writing and illustrating royalties even if they aren't skilled writers. The only thing that's different in this instance, really, is that instead of being inspired by an ancient folktale, Becker takes his inspiration from a more recent classic, with a known author-illustrator.

Aaron Becker, like Crockett, comes to illustration from another art field - from film-making. His website, storybreathing, showcases his many talents and includes lots of fascinating goodies about the book, including a trailer that's simply amazing and a fascinating video on the making of the book.

Sharing these Books with Kids
First, please note that these books are for the older end of the picture book range (and continue through adults). Many toddlers will find some of the images scary (even in Harold I've seen little ones frightened by the dragon or the water going over Harold's head.) I'm always inclined to read both books, Harold first, without noting the similar stories and wait a bit to see whether the kids catch it on their own.

From there, you can let them comb the books, looking for similarities (be sure to have the other Harold stories available too, for the images borrowed from them). After that, you can have a conversation about the ways they are different and wonder about the whys - the use of color and detail, the use of words (or not), the inclusion of back story, the gender of the main characters, the colors of their respective crayons, the resolutions of the stories, and so on. Even the difference in size, shape, and size is interesting to talk about. Talk about which the kids like better as well as the different kinds of feelings produced by the two illustrators' approaches.

With older kids, you can broach some even more interesting topics like these:
1) In both books, the kids can control their worlds by what they draw. Why do you suppose both end up drawing scary things?
2) How do the kids get out of tough situations, using their crayons? Was there ever a time you wished you had a magical crayon to get you out of a tough situation? What would you have drawn?
3) If you were making up your own world, what would you put in it? What would you leave out? Why?

Making These Books a Special Gift
I plan on giving these as a set this holiday season, and I'll make the gift extra special by including:
  • A crayon (perhaps green. Or blue. Or maybe a box of crayons. Haven't decided...),
  • Watercolors or tempera paints or a set of markers or colored pencils for experimenting with color
  • Maybe some different media, to encourage yet another approach to the story? Maybe cardstock and lightweight cardboard, chenille stems,clay? paper-mache?), along with scissors and tape or glue to experiment with a 3-D telling,
  • A roll of paper - there's something about a whole lo-o-o-o-ong blank page that spurs imaginative drawing
  • A blank book
For older kids, you can't go wrong by giving them some artist-quality materials - it makes such a difference in the quality of what they can make. And perhaps more importantly, it makes them feel respected and capable - and what better gift is there than that?


Monday, February 20, 2012

Women and the Caldecott, Part II: More Musings About the Gender Gap

By Carol Baicker-McKee
This post includes images of a few of the books illustrated by women and published in 2011 that were noted as distinguished for illustrations - only not by this year's Caldecott committee.
Illustrated by Pamela Dalton. Chronicle Books, 2011. Watercolored cut paper illustrations.
Note: This post is a follow-up to one I wrote recently: Why Don't Women Illustrators Win Caldecott Awards? and to last week's post by Cynthia Light Brown: Caldecott, CEOs and Confidence.

Bear with me for a few minutes: I'm opening with a story that at first glance may seem off-topic, but which I promise to connect.

In the mid-1980s when I taught psychology at a community college, I began units on gender topics with a couple classroom surveys. First I asked my students 15 questions about their real or future/hypothetical daughters, ranging from "Would you dress your infant daughter in blue?" through "Would you support and encourage your eight-year-old daughter if she wanted to switch from ballet lessons to playing baseball ?" to "Would you feel proud of your adult daughter for pursuing a traditionally male career like physics teacher or police officer?"

The results of  my informal survey were remarkably consistent (if not rigorously scientific). Nearly all the students (who ranged in age from 18 to early 70s, with most in their 20s) thought it was good or at least acceptable for females to take on male gender roles.

After a short discussion in which my students generally agreed that attitudes about women's roles had improved, I gave the quiz again.

Only this time with a small twist.

I asked them to think about their real or future/hypothetical sons with questions ranging from "Would you dress your infant son in pink?" through "Would you support and encourage your eight-year-old son if he wanted to switch from playing baseball to taking ballet lessons?" to "Would you feel proud of your adult son for pursuing a traditionally female career like preschool teacher or social worker?"
The results were very different. Most (though not all) of my students were uncomfortable with the idea of allowing or encouraging their sons to adopt any traditionally feminine characteristics or activities.

When time permitted, I followed up by asking the questions one more time, in the gender-traditional way (e.g., would you dress your daughter in pink, son in blue, etc.) and few students ever balked at allowing/encouraging traditional roles.

In other words, my students felt it was okay for girls to act like girls, boys to act like boys and girls to act like boys - but not good for boys to act like girls. Got that?
Red Sled by Lita Judge (2011) Watercolor and pencil. A fun romp with minimal text and remarkable design as well as graphically strong illustrations
This classroom exercise came to mind recently as I've continued to mull over possible reasons for the gap in Caldecott Medals. I'll let you noodle its possible implications for a few minutes while I discuss some other thoughts. 

In addition to doing some wondering of my own, I've talked with a variety of interested parties, including other writers and illustrators I know, librarians, teachers, parents, kids, and folks who commented on my earlier post, seeking their guesses about what's going on. I also read a number of discussions about it around the internet. Some of the more active and lively discussions of this issue can be found in the following places:
Illustrated by Melissa Sweet in richly layered collage/assemblage and water color technique that is particularly appropriate for this subject. It received a Siebert Award for most distinguished informational book - but no Caldecott.

Here then, in no particular order, are some of the other thoughts on the issue that I've come across or considered.

Is there Really a Gender Gap?
Several bloggers or commenters have suggested that the basic premise is wrong: there isn't really a gender gap - just one of those statistical things that gives an illusion of a gap. For example, one commentor on the child_lit forums asserted that the problem was a small "n" - not enough data points since we only have 75 medals to consider.

Others said that the proportion of women winners has gone up and down and just because we are in a low point right now, doesn't mean that overall there's a real gender gap.

I'm confident, though, that there is a real gender gap. I think 75 data points is sufficient to discern a trend, especially one as unequivocal as this (not quite as unequivocable as the gender gap in U.S. presidents, but still...). Although the proportion of female winners has varied from decade to decade, in seven full decades women have never captured even half of the medals - 4 of the 10 is the best ever, and that has happened only twice and it's been a while (in the 1960s and 1970s). Plus things have been much worse recently - only 2 women winners in the 1990s and 1 in the 2000s. But you can draw your own conclusions: at the end of this post I have listed all the female Caldecott winners by decade.
Stunning illustrations in innovative retelling (by illustrator's son) of classic tale in soft watercolor. Reviewers also noted book's outstanding design and typography in starred reviews. Burkert earlier received a Caldecott Honor but has never won the medal despite consistent acclaim for her work. Makes a nice pairing with Pinkney's beautiful Caldecott Medal winner The Lion and the Mouse (2009) for different perspectives on the same tale.

Does the Gap Reflect Male-Female Differences in Self-Confidence?
If you haven't already, please read Cynthia Light Brown's thoughtful - and thought-provoking - post (here) about how males typically have an excess of confidence in their abilities while females underestimate their abilities. I find much of her thesis dovetails with my own personal experiences as well as with other research I've seen on gender gaps in many endeavors. 

My first thought was that it's great to think about this as a primary source of the problem, confidence is a changeable trait, and thus this gender gap is mutable. But then I remembered studies like this classic one by the organization Catalyst about the double-bind for women in leadership roles; if women are not assertive, they aren't rewarded as well as assertive men. Unfortunately, assertive women aren't rewarded either; they're just viewed as pushy. You know, in that witch-with-a-capital-B way. So it becomes a no-win situation.
I wonder if it works that way in children's publishing too. What do you think?

Should Librarians on the Caldecott Make More of an Effort to Close the Gap?
Janice Haryda on her blog One Minute Book Reviews says YES!  Just to be clear, she isn't asserting a conscious effort to discriminate against women, just that there must be some institutionalized bias driving Caldecott committees to reward men at a much higher rate, given that most other award organizations are able to identify plenty of outstanding books by female illustrators each year. Nor is she saying that they should lower their standards; she cites outstanding books by female illustrators she feels have been unnecessarily passed over. What she wants to do is make the committees notice their biases so that they can overcome them when warranted.

Many of the librarians I spoke with were surprised at the gender discrepancy; they'd never conciously paid attention to the gender of the winners. But I sensed that they were uncomfortable to discover the trend.

I wonder if these discussions will prompt future committees to be more aware of gender. (Or perhaps of race and ethnic identity as well: see Janice's  post on the racial gap in Caldecott winners too.

Is It Condescending to Female Illustrators Who've Won or Mean-Spirited toward Male Winners and Caldecott Committees to Talk About This Gap?
I must confess this reaction (by the author-husband of a past female winner who commented on Janice's post, as well as another commentor) startled me. First I'm genuinely bewildered about how the discussion could be seen as condescending toward women who have won. Second, I don't think it's automatically mean-spirited to raise uncomfortable issues; indeed I think people involved in children's literature are obligated to consider them.

Personally, I also didn't consider Janice's language to be anything more than blunt and perhaps a shade tough. And given not only how long this gap has persisted but how it has worsened, perhaps some blunt, tough language is needed to capture people's attention and to motivate change.
Another gem by the talented and prolific Patricia Polacco. Her distinctive pencil and watercolor illustrations and creative texts have garnered her many awards, including a Caldecott Honor - but never the medal.

Does The Gap Matter to Anyone Except Female Illustrators?
I say yes. Ultimately the gap matters most not to the winners or losers of the awards, but to the audiences who read those books - and to the wider society.

And Finally, That Brings Me Back to My Original Story!
What my surveys showed me - and quite frankly I was shocked even then - is that in general, our society devalues feminine characteristics, strengths, interests. I hope that those attitudes have changed in the last 25 years or so, but I'm guessing they've changed less than I'd like.
I do suspect there are some actual differences in how male and female artists illustrate children's books. (If anyone out there knows about an analysis of content, style, etc., I'd love to review it). I also suspect that the differences are in reality smaller and harder to detect than the gender gap would lead us to believe (and I wonder what would happen to the gender gap if it were possible to carry out the illustration and award processes in a gender blind way). But at the same time, I would not be surprised to learn that men and women generally approached book illustration with different visions and different aims. 

In my searches the last couple weeks, I've seen/heard suppositions that in general, work by women is more domestic in theme and content, softer, quieter, more conventional and more often aimed at younger audiences, while work by men is more often ground-breaking, exciting, silly, engaging, and aimed at older audiences.

Does it strike you, as it did me, that these descriptions mirror the traits assigned to traditional parenting styles of mothers versus fathers?

Do these proposed differences seem accurate to you? And do you think the female approach is less good? Does it seem like female winners (especially recent ones) are more "male" in their approach?
More to Think About
  •  Should future Caldecott committees take the gender of the illustrator into account when making their selection(s)? If so, how?
  • Should there be a separate award for best illustration by a woman? (I reflexively don't like the idea, but...)
  • What makes book illustration distinguished?
  • What advice would you give an illustrator who wants to increase her chances of winning the Caldecott?
  • Should the Caldecott even award a medal for "best"? Many other illustration awards select a list of outstanding, with no one title singled out.
  • Should book buyers give so much weight to Caldecott winners?
Women Who Have Won the Caldecott (By Decade)
I have marked women who co-won with their illustrator husbands with an asterisk and counted each as 1/2 in my totals for the decades. Also, the first time  an illustrator is listed, clicking on her name will link either to her website or to a page about her.
A couple other notes: Marcia Brown has won the Medal three times, Barbara Cooney and Nonny Hogrogian have won twice on their own; Diane Dillon has won twice with her husband. In total in the 75 years of the Medal, 15 women solo illustrators have the award  and an additional 5 have one as part of husband-wife team. You can see the full list of Medal and Honor winners here.

2010s [Only 3 years so far]

2000s (1)
1990s (2)
1980s (3.5)
1970s (4)
  • *Diane Dillon [co-won with husband Leo Dillon] (1977 - Ashanti to Zulu: African Traditions)
  • *Diane Dillon [co-won with husband Leo Dillon] (1976 - Why People Buzz in People's Ears)
  • Margot Zemach (1974 - Duffy and the Devil)
  • Nonny Hogrogian (1972 - One Fine Day)
  • Gail E. Haley (1971 - A Story, A Story)
1960s (4)
  • Evaline Ness (1967 - Sam, Bangs, and Moonshine)
  • Nonny Hogrogian (1966 - Always Room for One More)
  • Marcia Brown (1962 - Once a Mouse)
  • Marie Hall Ets (1960 - Nine Days to Christmas)
1950s (3)
  • Barbara Cooney (1959 - Chanticleer and the Fox)
  • Marcia Brown (1955 - Cinderella, or The Glass Slipper)
  • Katherine Milhous (1950 - The Egg Tree)
1940s (3.5)
1930s [only awarded 2 years - 1]
  • Dorothy P. Lathrop (1938 - The Animals of the Bible) This was the first Caldecott awarded.

Monday, May 2, 2011

Cowboy Sam Tips His Hat to the New Grandma

posted by Jenny Ramaley

While Mother Nature has brought us April showers - and February showers and March showers and looks like a whole lot of May showers to come - a special shower has touched our own, much-loved Kitty.  She's recently been blessed with two grandchildren, first Arthur, who arrived in December, and last week, Cecilia.
After getting an email with the new grandbaby's photo, I took a memory trip to when my own girls were young. Kitty's first book, Cowboy Sam and Those Confounded Secrets, has a special place in my heart because it was my daughters' last picture book. They already thought they were a little 'old' for a story book, but because they knew Kitty, my girls cuddled up on the couch while I read this sweet and special book to them. Those 'read-to-me-Mommy' days don't last forever . . .
Just imagine how wonderful it will be when Arthur and Cecilia snuggle with their grandmother to listen as she reads them her own Texas tall tale!

Mike Wohnoutka's illustrations are texas-terrific!

So, a big congratulations to Kitty, and her daughters, Bea and Danika. If you've never had a chance to read Cowboy Sam and hear about his very special hat, you can check it out here:  http://www.amazon.com/Cowboy-Sam-Those-Confounded-Secrets/dp/0618088547/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1304348362&sr=8-1

Monday, April 11, 2011

In the Forecast: A Deluge of e-Picture Books?


Comparison of book version and ipad version of spreads from The Three Little Pigs illustrated by L. Leslie Brooke
Like Kitty in this post, I've been thinking about the flood of technology changes for readers. In particular, I've been amazed at the shift to ebooks: by the middle of 2010, Amazon reported that e-book sales for its Kindle device had surpassed those of hardcovers, and by early 2011, they had surpassed sales of paperbacks. That's a phenomenal shift in the way many people read books.

But like many other children's book people, I've been assuming that picture books are different, that they will persist almost exclusively as physical objects rather than evolve into electronic files to be consumed on a reader. (See, for example, this post by the fabulous author Eric Kimmel.)

For one thing, who wants to hand a young child an expensive electronic device to get dropped, banged, smudged with sticky fingers, and perhaps even drooled and chewed on? For another, reading with a young child is a cozy, physical experience - curling up with a screen just doesn't seem the same from an emotional viewpoint. Finally, there are all the difficulties of picture books that most e-readers aren't well designed to handle, beginning with color, and continuing through full spread illustrations, and the wide variety of sizes and shapes of books that don't translate precisely to the fixed screens of devices.

But I'm starting to realize I was wrong. Picture books are going "e" and I wonder how profound and rapid the shift will be.


Image on Color Nook from Go Dog, Go by P.D. Eastman
 One reason is the introduction of more e-readers that can handle color. The recent debut of the color Nook (the Barnes and Noble reader) and the growing popularity of tablets like the ipad means that more e-readers can provide a visually pleasing reading experience.
Screen shot of the cover of Green Eggs and Ham ipad app

Another is that the proliferation of ipads and other tablets is leading to the development of more and more picture book apps - a medium that's part book, part game, part animation. (See for example this recent NPR article on children's book apps for the ipad.) More "shiny" choices for kids = more people buying this format rather than traditional books.

I think too that I underestimated the comfort of young parents with sharing their electronics with their kids. In the grocery story now, I nearly always see a mom distracting a fussy toddler not with a cookie but with a game or book app on her expensive smart phone. (I'll also wager that there are teams of engineers right now developing readers aimed at hard-using tots.) And as this other NPR article reflects, today's parents don't feel as awkward as I do about snuggling at bedtime with a device and an interactive app that does all the work rather than a paper and board book that I have to read out loud myself.

So what do you think? Are ebooks going to replace traditional picture books? Do you use them? Love them or hate them?

Friday, March 11, 2011

Blown Away by The Trucker – Preschooler Pick

by Marcy Collier

When you read to a child from a young age, you instill a lifelong love for books in your child. As writers, we have favorite authors that we choose to read to our children, but as your toddler strives to become an I-can-do-it-by myself preschooler, you must let go a bit and encourage your child to explore new books.

I started reading aloud to both of my boys while in the womb. I know, I know, some people don’t believe the growing baby can hear you, but I did and still do. While they were infants, I read to them everything from board books to novels to the daily newspaper. As each of them grew a little older and became more independent, we made weekly trips to the library where would sit and read. At first, it took a lot of self-control not to snatch up my favorite picture books by Jane Yolen or David Shannon, curl up in the cozy corner with them and read. My older son was hooked on Thomas the Train and Curious George books. By the end of that phase, I knew every single train name and each H.A. Rey tale by heart. Those were his choices.

My younger son, now a preschooler, is crazy about truck books. One of the libraries we frequent categorizes the books by subjects. This is a fabulously kid-friendly way to help young children explore literature.  

His favorite choice for this week is, The Trucker, written and illustrated by Barbara Samuels (Farrar Straus Giroux, 2010). http://www.amazon.com/Trucker-Barbara-Samuels/dp/0374378045.
The text begins, “Leo was a Trucker. No doubt about it.” Leo is obsessed with trucks in every form of imaginative play. When Mama points out green tulips, Leo sees a green garbage truck. When Mama notices the Adopt a Cat window display, Leo wants the fire truck toy in the window. Mama surprises Leo with Lola the cat, which is NOT a fire truck. Soon, Lola takes over all of Leo’s favorite toy trucks as her playthings. Leo has had enough with Lola until she saves the day during a pretend fire rescue. Energetic, playful illustrations make this story a fun and exciting read.

The School Library Journal gave this book a STARRED review. “Hilarious, and full of the details in a child's everyday life. It's fun from cover to cover.”

If I had not been willing to let go a bit, I would never have found this great book, which my preschooler adores. When my older son started kindergarten, he loved exploring his school library and choosing new books, while many of his classmates bulked that books were boring. His reply, “You must not have found the right book yet. Keep looking.”

To instill the lifelong love of reading in your kids, you have to encourage them to explore new authors and titles. Your children may just help you discover your next new, favorite book.

Friday, December 3, 2010

I Come Bearing Gifts: Illustration Basics -- for Writers!

This is meant to be a present for all you picture book writers out there, so I hope it doesn't come across sounding too much like a lecture.

Which it might. Because it kind of is. It's an abbreviated version of the guest lecture I gave last night to students in the kid lit class taught by Kitty Griffin Lagorio at Chatham University.

Well, you'll just have to suck it up and say thank you to me anyhow. That's how it is: you have to act all appreciative even for the scratchy woolen undershirts your Great Aunt Agatha got you when what you were really hoping for was the deluxe Animal Clinic with Vet Operating Room and add-on Guinea Pig Pen from Playmobil.
(I need this set; I am a complete sucker for all things miniature, Playmobil, and animal-related. Oh, and definitely for anything guinea pig-related. And I really, really need the set because my husband says absolutely, positively no more pets [don't worry - we still have some], especially not little caged ones, even though he agrees that our late guinea pig, Hamster aka Piggy, was cute and sweet. Someday I'll grow up. Maybe. Okay, probably not.)
Okay, on to the point. And really, this is a better gift than the hot chocolate that the little chick is giving the snowman above (though probably not as good as the Guinea Pig Pen set. And definitely not as good as a real, live guinea pig. I love them squeakers.)

We'll begin with the facts.

Fact # 1 The picture book market is tighter than ever. See, for example, this recent New York Times article which I found incredibly distressing. (Also see this thoughtful reaction from the stellar kids' books columnist Karen MacPherson. And then go check out Anita Silvey's children's book-a-day blog .)
Fact # 2 Author-illustrators disproportionately win Caldecott Medals and Honor awards over illustrator-onlies. And if you add in true collaborative teams of writer-illustrators, which you should, the do-togethers give the do-separately's a real whupping. And I am pretty sure that this is not coincidence or happenstance - there are reasons why have one unit tends to produce better picture books.

Fact #3 Even if you have zero artistic skills (as in can't even draw a stick figure that's not missing an essential body part), you can still learn the illustrator's mindset that will let you craft manuscripts with all the panache of a skilled author-illustrator. And that will give your picture book manuscript a leg up in capturing the attention of an editor or agent, in getting beautifully illustrated by a dream artist, and in becoming a fabulous (and maybe even award-winning) book beloved by generations of children.

I really don't think I'm over-promising here.

Here's how. Take notes. Or just download my lecture notes here. Oops - just noticed they translated funny into a pdf. Hmm. I'll fix them tomorrow.

Step One Think Like an Illustrator as Well as a Writer in the Planning and First Draft Stages
That means coming up with a story and manner of telling it that involves lots of action. Show-able action. Books packed with lots of feeling and thinking divorced from doing simply don't lend themselves to fabulous illustrations. They'll be visually boring. No one will want to illustrate them, much less spend $20 on them. Plan for visual variety - you want different locations, characters, stuff happening. Okay, Margaret Wise Brown and Clement Hurd's Goodnight Moon all takes place in the same one room with the same small cast of characters just saying goodnight to stuff - but at least it was a "great" room and Clement Hurd is an illustrating genius. (And it didn't win any awards in its day - it didn't even sell well until many years later.)


Remember you have 32 pages to work with, minus front matter and maybe back matter. You have to be able to fill up those pages in a mix of single page, full spread, and spot illustrations - but not cram them so full they overflow. So avoid trying to accomplish too much or too little. Think Baby Bear and Just Right.

Think about how HALF, yes half, the story gets to be told in pictures by the illustrator. Nobody likes a ball hog; sharing is nice and only fair.

And then just write. Go ahead and put in all the stuff I'm going to make you cut later - the long, boring, detailed descriptions, the extra scenes, the part of the story the illustrator can tell all by herself. Just get it out - I know you have to. (I'm a writer too.)

Step Two Imagine Your Manuscript as a Book and Divide Up the Text
Use a pencil for this stage - you'll probably have to mark up your manuscript over and over. I always do. It takes me at least five tries to get it right - and usually more. It's HARD. Don't forget to leave room in the 32 pages for front matter (title page, copyright, dedication, etc.) and back matter if needed. Also don't forget that page 1 and page 32 stand alone - the rest are spreads with the even numbers on the left and the odd ones on the right. You can print out my one page storyboard here, if that helps you keep it in mind.

After you do that, really exercise your visual imagination and make your manuscript into an illustrated book in some fashion. Help, you cry! I can't draw a lick! Don't fret - deformed stick figures, blob trees and furnishings, etc. are perfectly fine. It's more a matter of imagining what might be on a page. You can do this on the storyboard I've provided (if you haven't reached reading glasses stage of life) or you can make a dummy (or sketched sample) book by folding 8 pieces of paper in half (which makes 32 pages since you'll use fronts and backs), or even, if you're really drawing-challenged, by writing an annotated copy of your manuscript that describes the possible illustrations and their placement.

Think about page turns (the reader should be compelled by words and/or pictures to relieve the tension you and the illustrator have created on the current spread by turning the page); variety, rhythm, repetition, and balance in the images and text and their relation to each other;and the opening, big moment and last image, all of which need to be visually compelling, matched with the text in quantity and impact, and satisfying.

Finally, don't get too wedded to your own vision. The chances that the illustrator will duplicate it are, quite frankly, slim. But she'll be drawn in by your obvious attention to visual structure.

Step Three Cut and Change
Especially cut. Ruthlessly. All those lovely descriptions that you now realize can be shown in the illustration? Slash. All that explanation that will be conveyed even more movingly or humorously in pictures? Delete. All those unnecessary words, words, words? GET RID OF THEM. The best picture book manuscripts (today) are spare, even poetic. Think haiku. Think minimalist. Think uncluttered.

You may realize you need to eliminate entire scenes (or, more rarely, add some). Or you might want to move things around, like rearranging the furniture, so page turns work better and you're not tripping over story elements on your way from Point A to Point B.

This will be a hard, hard, hard step for most writers. Time for chocolate and a sympathetic friend. 

Repeat Step Two Divide It Up. Again.
It will probably be easier this time. But you want to make sure the new, abbreviated, rearranged version works.

Step Four Play Around with the Relationship Between Words and Images
This is not as kinky as it sounds. Great picture books pair text and illustrations like Fred Astaire and Ginger Rogers danced -- not like those clumsy partners who get eliminated in the first two rounds of Dancing with the Stars (or in some cases, magically last until the final rounds...). The words and images dance together so seamlessly they create something new and magical that's better than anything those superstar dancers could do by themselves. Look for places where the text can contradict the illustration (and thereby add humor), for places where the images can push the text to save something more, something profound or profoundly silly, that the words just don't say by themselves.

Step Five  Now Write Your Perfect Final Draft
Create that lovely language with rhythm and alliteration. Find perfect rhymes or coin silly new words. Figure out a line that will become a national catchphrase. It's okay to invest that effort now because you have cut away all the fat already and what you have left is lean and beautiful and ready to be in front of the camera, or at least an editor's eyes. Your story and words will shine because they are no longer obscured by unnecessary clutter.

Final Step Share a Cup of Delicious Mocha Hot Chocolate with a Friend

Here's a recipe that 's pretty darned good (and really pretty easy, except for not eating the chocolate before you get around to making your drink). The key is to use GOOD chocolate and GOOD coffee.

1 cup of milk (I personally think lowfat is fine, especially if you top your cup with a little whipped cream...)
1 cup leftover from breakfast strong-brewed, really good coffee
4 oz. best quality dark chocolate, chopped
Sugar or sweetener, if desired. (Start with one teaspoon - I'm personally happy without.)
Other options: teaspoon of vanilla, 1/2 tsp cinnamon (or use a cinnamon stick to stir it), dash of hot pepper sauce (surprisingly good), dash of sea salt (also surprisingly good)
Two dollops whipped cream, preferably homemade. You could use marshmallows instead, but I would pity you; whipped cream is gobs better
Extra grated chocolate for garnish, if desired

Heat the milk, coffee and chopped chocolate over medium heat to desired temperature. I like to whisk the mixture to make it frothy. You could also use one of those handheld blender thingies if you like it really foamy. Taste and add any additions that tickle your fancy. Garnish with whipped cream and grated chocolate. Share!