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Monday, April 15, 2013

The Rutgers One-On-One Plus Application Is Up

by Marcy Collier






The 44th annual Rutgers One-on-One Plus Conference will be held on October 19, 2013. I had the privilege of being accepted the last two years. It is by far the best writing conference I’ve ever attended. Unfortunately, I can’t apply this year because of a conflict, but I wanted to get the information out to our readers.

To find all of the information about the conference, go to: http://www.ruccl.org/One-on-One_Plus_Conference.html

Many of the Route 19 writers have attended Rutgers both as mentees and mentors. Check out these articles to learn about our experiences.




Here are eight tips when applying for the Rutgers conference:

1.  DO NOT WAIT UNTIL THE DEADLINE TO APPLY. The council matches the number of mentees with the number of mentors.  Usually it’s between 70-80. A LOT of writers apply to this conference. The sooner you get your application in, the better.

2.  Be professional. Type your application. Check for typos. Read all of the information on the Rutgers website a few times.

3.  Submit you best polished work. Acceptance is based on the strength and quality of your work. The manuscript pages or the artwork that you send must be your best. Have your critique group read your submission and application before you submit it.

4.  Be honest about the track record of your manuscript. The Rutgers council works extremely hard to match mentees with mentors. If the agent or editor has already seen your work and has rejected it, he or she wouldn’t be a good fit.

5.  Send a resume along with your application. List places where you’ve published (i.e. magazines, etc.).  List conferences , workshops or classes you’ve attended to improve your craft.

6.  Once your submission has been sent, do not send it out to the agents or editors listed as mentors.

7.  Don’t forget to include your check, a S.A.S.E. for notification and a postcard to ensure that your application was received.

8.  Now the waiting game begins. Block off  October 19th on your calendar in case you get accepted. You will be notified by the end of August. I remember last year, I had been on vacation when notifications were sent. When I picked up my mail, I was thrilled to see the acceptance letter!

GOOD LUCK!!!  

Friday, April 12, 2013

19 Writing Tips by Kitty Griffin

 Just 19 tips for those of you writing for children.





1. From Emma Dryden--Social Media (twitter, FB, blogs, websites) is never meant to be a sales pitch venue. NEVER. It is all meant to be a means to chat with colleagues, readers, and a way to make new friends.  Blogs are not read by kids, so blogs are not meant to be geared towards young readers -- rather, blogs are a really important way for writers to share their writing, their ideas, their thoughts, their interests with other adults -- writers, editors, friends, etc.  Blogs are an excellent way to start conversations, to raise questions, to ask friends and strangers to join in on a conversation, to express themselves, etc.  They say that for blogs to be most effective, the author should post 2 times a week -- this is a lot, so the idea of a group blog is terrific!  Generate ideas, share poetry, share recipes, share anecdotes about kids, pets, family, etc....all of this is a way to make writers more "personal" to a larger community  of readers.

2. From George Ella Lyon—“They don’t come to your house.”
(Knock! Knock! “Oh, hello hard-working writer, I’m a famous New York editor and I hear you have a story that is just wonderful. Can I see it? If you don’t send it they won’t see it!)

3. From Jane Yolen—“Butt in chair.”

4. Meeting an editor can make all the difference in the world. There are lots of conferences out there. Once you make a connection, work it, but do it professionally. Remember that editors today are insanely busy. A card to say thanks after having a one on one is nice. Nothing about your manuscript or your brilliant writing, just a plain thanks for taking time to help me.

5. Don’t bother an editor who doesn’t want a picture book with a picture book manuscript. Pay attention to what they do and what they want. If they don’t want sci fi, don’t tell them that yours will change their mind. It won’t.

6. The first page is so important. While quiet writing is always lovely and enchanting, I’ve found that the stories I have that slap the reader right into the story are the ones that get the most attention. Strong voice, vibrant verbs, and snappy dialogue will get your next page looked at. Then that has to be strong, vibrant and snappy, too.

7. Stay focused. No matter what is going on around you, keep your eyes on the prize, and that’s a finished manuscript. Then remember, an editor will tell you, “I love it love it love it can you change it?” This is hard, but ask yourself, “Do I want to be published?”

8. Invest in some classes. After all, if you don’t believe in you, who will? If you’re serious about your writing, but you realize you’re not getting anywhere, take a class and see if that helps. If you write fiction, maybe try a nonfiction class to see where it leads. Push yourself. Stretch your creativity. Get uncomfortable.

9. Rejection sucks. Nothing makes it feel better. It’s lousy. Remember that word, persistence. Be persistent and believe in yourself.

10. When something nice happens, reward yourself. Let the feeling last oh, a good ten minutes. Then get back to work.
 
From "The Ride: The Legend of Betsy Dowdy" Illustration by Marjorie Priceman
11. Make sure you are following the publishers’ guidelines. Read their submission policy carefully. Some want exclusive (me only) submissions. Some don’t care. Some want a first chapter. Some want a certain number of pages. If you’re addressing your query to someone in particular, make sure the name is spelled correctly. I've heard editors/agents talk about not reading a manuscript because THEIR name was spelled incorrectly.
12. Are you in a writer’s group? If there’s one in your area, try it on for size. Go three times and if you’re inspired and you RESPECT the people in the group, give it a try. Writer’s groups should nurture, not reject. They should help, not hinder. If there is someone who dominates the time and interjects and interrupts, run away.
13. Can you tell your story in three sentences? The first would tell the beginning, the second would be the middle, and the last one would give a hint about the ending. Can you do that? If you can’t…put the story in the oven and let it rise some more. Seriously. If you can’t do this three-sentence thing, your story is going to run all over the place. (THIS IS THE MOST IMPORTANT PIECE OF ADVICE IN THIS POST) 
14. When your crafting character’s dialogue, make sure that everyone doesn’t sound exactly the same.
15. How are your transitions? Are they conducting the reader or stopping them in their tracks?
16. Does your main character talk to herself a lot? Like all the time? Might could be you want to give her a friend to talk to.
17. Try to avoid using was.
18. Do you know what third person close means? It's the most common POV used in children's writing. If you don't know, find out. Or write to me and I'll tell you.
19. Remember, you can do this. You can do this. It takes time and persistence, but you can do this. I did it. You can too.
Look at how confident I was as a kid! Yee haw!





Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Keeping Up with the Competiton: 5 Ways to Find Out Who's Writing What

     Though it's been said many times before in these very blog pages, 'butt in chair' is the most effective way to get some writing done.  I would have to add, however, that an effective way to find out what all the other butts are doing is to practice 'body in bookstore.' In other words, I like to keep up with the Writing Joneses and see what's out there.  I have found five ways to check out the competition :
1) Peruse the children's shelves in Barnes and Noble, or any other bookseller near you.  Even though we know that publishers pay for prominent shelf space, it still helps to see who is populating those shelves.  Movie-tie-ins? Seasonal stuff? Classics? The latest release in a series? And always look at who is publishing what.
2) SCBWI Newletter...check out the editions that showcase newly published works - they even include the genre so you get a little more information.
3) Publishers Weekly.  Not all bookstores carry this but I have been able to find the spring and fall editions which showcase all the new children's publications.  It's $12 but maybe you can check it out without buying it, or sometimes SCBWI offers a discount on just these two issues.
4) Horn Book.  A delightful publication about books for children and young adults which is also available online and includes other features- sometimes even Newbury/Caldecott acceptance speeches.
5) New York Times Book Review.  Granted, you have to buy the Sunday NY Times and children's books aren't always reviewed, but often they are themed seasonally or topically.

During my most recent review of the competition I was impressed by something I already had heard - everyone is writing about dinosaurs!  Time to get back home and put my butt in a Jurassic chair...

Monday, April 8, 2013

First Friday-Five Favorite Things: Goblin Secrets



by William Alexander

(Photograph by Matthew Aronoff)

This past Friday, April 5, Marcy and I posted our answers to Will's debut novel, Goblin Secrets. Today, you get to read Will's favorites. Take note what he says about picking favorites. It was difficult for us, too. Perhaps that was because there are so many good things to choose from.


1) What is your favorite line or paragraph from the novel as it relates to the main character's development and/or growth?

Will - Firstly, I'm no good at favorites. I'm about to reveal my favorite bits of the book as of this particular moment. Ask me again in an hour and my answers will have changed.

So, as of this moment, my favorite moment of character growth in GOBLIN SECRETS is this one:


Rownie stepped backward again. "No," he said. Now he haunted the tunnels. Now he was something to be afraid of.

2) Who is your favorite secondary character and why?

Will - Thomas the Tamlin (goblin) actor, because he is grumpy, eloquent, and curses like this: "I will write you into our next play! I will sculpt your face into grotesque caricatures and paste them onto small, ugly puppets! I'll pen your name into immortal verse, and for a thousand years it will be synonymous with ridicule and scorn!"

3) What is your favorite line or paragraph of description?

Will - The south side of the city was dusty. Rownie  tried not to step in any of the dust piles that littered the street. Every morning sweepers swept their houses, and they left large, brown piles outside their doorsteps. Every day the dust came slowly back inside and covered the floors. There was a kind of fish that swam in Southside dust, and a kind of bird that fished with their long beaks in the dust dunes. The lives of sweepers became interesting during dustfish spawning season.

4) What is your favorite line of dialogue?

Will - More cursing from Thomas: "I will have our artificer build a pair of gearworked ravens and they will croak your vile name outside your bedroom window, every night, at irregular intervals! You will never sleep again!" He lowered his voice then, but only a little. "Does anyone remember his name?"


5) What is your favorite chapter ending or cliffhanger?

Will - He found the goblin sign. It read:

THEATRE!
A Troupe of Tamlin PLAYERS will Delight and Astound the Citizens of this Fair City at Dusk.
Discover their Stage in the CITY FAIRGROUNDS.
The stage will be Illuminated by Cunning Devices.
The Players will present the finest Performances of MIMICRY, MUMMERY, and VERSE, along with Feats of Musical and Acrobatic Skill to Delight every Eye and Ear.
Two Coppers per Audience Member.

He read it again. He still didn't believe it. He read it again.
Goblins were putting on a play. Nobody could put on a play. Nobody was allowed to put on a play, but goblins were going to. Maybe he could see some of the show before they all got arrested.
Rownie ran the rest of the way across the bridge, through music from fiddles and whistles and drums. His coat billowed behind him like a sail.


Congratulations Will on your debut novel, Goblin Secrets and for winning the National Book Award!

We appreciate you sharing your current favorites for Goblin Secrets.

Look for Will's second book, Ghoulish Song, which was just released March 5, 2013.

You can find William at:


Friday, April 5, 2013

First Friday - Five Favorite Things - Debut Novel Day


by Dave Amaditz 
& Marcy Collier

Goblin Secrets

Welcome to April version of - First Friday - Five Favorite Things - Debut Novel Day. In this monthly series, we ask five simple questions about a debut novel that will hopefully entice anyone reading this post to pick up the novel and read it themselves, and/or give them at a glance some insight into the author's writing style and voice as well as how some of the characters might think or act. We do this by presenting, first, answers to our Five Favorite Things, followed by the author's answers in a follow-up post.

This month we're pleased to highlight debut author and National Book Award Winner, William Alexander's novel, Goblin Secrets.

1) What is your favorite line or paragraph from the novel as it relates to the main character's development and/or growth?

Dave - I picked this passage because the main character, Rownie, has just had his narrow view of the world grow larger. Not only has he met a troupe of goblin actors, but he realizes that they know of his missing brother, Rowan.

The circle of goblins all stared at Rownie with their large, bright-flecked eyes. Rownie tried not to cough again. The world had just changed shape, and he didn't recognize the new shape it was in.

Marcy – This development comes early in the story, but this brief snapshot gives the reader a better understanding for Rownie, the main character’s motivations and actions throughout the novel.
Rownie had a brother older than any of the siblings who shared Graba’s shack, an actual birth-brother. They looked alike, both of them dark with dark eyes – eyes you couldn’t easily see the bottom of. Everyone called the brothers Rowan and Little Rowan. After a while “Little Rowan” shortened into “Rownie.” Rownie had never had a name of his own. Their mother drowned before she’d had a chance to name him.

2) What is your favorite chapter ending or cliffhanger?

Dave - In Zombay, the tunnels are the worst place to go, yet Rownie goes there in search of his brother. He is confronted in the darkness by Graba, an evil spell caster, who is after both Rownie and his brother.

Rownie remained in the dark, with Graba. He tried to remember how to breathe.

Marcy – ***Spoiler Alert*** Poor Rownie has been searching high and low for his long lost brother the entire novel. The reader peers around every corner with Rownie, hoping and praying the two brothers will once again be reunited. I won’t give away the dramatic details, but check out this cliffhanger:
The railcar shook and slid to a halt. The lights inside sputtered and went out. “Rowan?” Rownie asked in the dark.

3) Who is your favorite secondary character and why?

Dave - Essa, a goblin, is my favorite secondary character. In the midst of chaos and danger she maintains her easy-going personality. What's not to like about lines like these?

The first example comes when she sees Patch, a goblin whom they feared dead.

"Shut it, scowly trousers!" Essa came sprinting from the other end of the tower and knocked both Patch and Nonny to the ground with a tackling hug. Patch held his leg and winced. "I'm sorry, I'm sorry!" said Essa. "Are you hurt? Is it bad? Are you actually drowned and you just came back to haunt us? I hope not. I would hate it if you said even less than you usually do."

The second example is her explaining to Rownie what a halberd is.

"If an ax and a spear had babies, they would be halberds," Essa told him. "It's a pokey-pokey weapon for convincing things that are taller than you to stay back, please. Here's one." She handed it to Rownie and grabbed another.


Marcy – Even though Rowan doesn’t appear until the end of the novel, I get such a clear picture of his vibrant and vivacious character through Rownie’s eyes that I keep hoping that I’ll get to meet the real Rowan, not simply hear about Rownie’s memories of him. Throughout the novel, little snippets of big brother’s character shine through like the paragraph below.

Sometimes Rowan had enough to buy an extra fish pastry, and they would split the third one. He always gave his younger brother the larger piece.

4) What is your favorite line or paragraph of description?

Dave - There were so many fantastic images throughout, but in the end I decided to pick one that gave a little insight into Rownie's personality as well as his kid-like voice.

Rownie understood very little of the conversation, though he listened carefully. He sifted words through his head like fine dust through his hands, and he caught what he could. As the youngest he was used to piecing together his understanding from snatches of overheard conversations, and the rest he set carefully aside on the shelf in the back of his mind.

Marcy – Like Dave said above, there were so many great lines of description that I had a hard time choosing as well, but I decided on one simple sentence. Twelve words. What an image it paints for the reader - well done!
The gravestones were all worn and crooked, like teeth badly cared for.

5) What is your favorite line of dialogue?

Dave - This comes from Essa, a goblin, and is extremely short. But I loved it. What else would a goblin actor say to their fellow actor before going on stage?

"Break your face, everybody!" said Essa. She said it with so much hope and cheer that Rownie was sure he must've heard her wrong.

Marcy – There is a scene in the novel where Thomas, one of the Goblins goes on a tirade and is going to curse Cob, the owner of the alehouse, for not paying the goblins for their performance. His young daughter comes out to make amends and shows true honor and bravery toward the goblins. Her sincerity comes through in these lines:
“I’m just sorry he tossed you out,” the girl said. You should have some payment for the show, so I brought you some bread.” She lifted the basket she held. “It’s fresh. It doesn’t have maggots in it, not unless your curses work very fast.” She gave him the basket.


You can find William at:

Tuesday, April 2, 2013

March Madness Poetry Finale


Congratulations, Dave Crawley!

The Route 19 Writers would like to congratulate our good friend, Dave Crawley for making it into the final two for the Think, Kid Think, 2013, March Madness Poetry contest.
Dave won round after round by using his witty word play and rhythmic meter to wow the audience with his mastery of words.
The final words have been revealed:
hullabaloo vs. bumbershoot
Dave has until 9:30 a.m. on Wednesday (E.S.T.) to submit his final poem. Then, the voting will begin, and Thursday evening at 9:30 p.m. (E.S.T.), the winner will be announced and will receive The Thinkier trophy on their mantle for the rest of 2013.
Dave, we all wish you the best of luck. You are a fantastic poet, and we are all proud of you for making it this far in this challenging competition!
Readers, we encourage you to go out and read both poems and vote for your favorite at: