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Friday, July 3, 2015

First Friday - Five Favorite Things - Debut Novel Day

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Welcome to July’s version of - First Friday - Five Favorite Things - Debut Novel Day. In this monthly series, we ask five simple questions about a debut novel that will hopefully entice anyone reading this post to pick up the novel and read it themselves, and/or give them at a glance some insight into the author's writing style and voice as well as how some of the characters might think or act. We do this by presenting, first, answers to our Five Favorite Things, followed by the author's answers in a follow-up post.

This month we're pleased to highlight debut YA novelist, David Arnold and his novel, Mosquitoland. After being uprooted from her home and mom in Cleveland, Ohio, Mary Iris Malone (Mim) is not okay. She hates living in Jackson, Mississippi with her father and stepmother. And now that all communication has been cut off with her mom, Mim is on the run to save her mom.


1) What is your favorite line or paragraph from the novel as it relates to the main character's development and/or growth?

DaveHome is hard. Harder than reasons. It’s more than a storage unit for your life and its collections. It’s more than an address, or even the house you grew up in. People say home is where the heart is, but I think maybe home is the heart. Not a place or a time, but an organ, pumping life into my life.

Marcy –  Mim remembers when her mom would give a homeless man money. She’d purposely go the long way to soccer practice so she could give the man three dollars. One day Mim’s dad was with them. He started complaining about how the lazy bum could get a job, when Mim’s mom rolled down the window and handed Reggie three dollars.

Later, just before bed, I asked her if Dad was mad that she gave three bucks to Reggie. She said no, but I knew better. I asked if Dad was right, if Reggie was nothing but a lazy drunk. Mom said some homeless folk were like that, but she didn’t think Reggie was one of them. She said if he were, she would give him three bucks. She said it wasn’t her job to pick which ones were genuinely starving and which ones were faking it.

“Help is help to anyone, Mary. Even if they don’t know they’re asking for it.”

I said that made a whole lot of sense, because it did.

And it still does.

Here’s the thing, Iz: my mom needs help right now. And I know it, even if she doesn’t.


2) What is your favorite chapter ending or cliffhanger?

Dave - I jog up to cement stairs, unable to hold back a smile of my young adult life. This detour has already paid for itself.

MarcyThis paragraph speaks for itself.

I am tired of being alone.

“You need help?” Walt’s quiet voice brings me back to the now, the real, the detour.

I, Mary Iris Malone, smile at the bright new moon. Wiping away my tears, I wonder if things are finally changing, “Yeah, Walt, I might.”


3) Who is your favorite secondary character and why?

Dave – I chose Mom as my favorite secondary character. She has so many lines that made her seem to me, so carefree, so down-to-Earth. Mim, the main character, is worried her mother is going to be mad after she got into a fight in school defending a friend.

“There are worse fates than being slow-witted,” she says. “You broke that other kids nose, right? The one who made fun of Ricky?” I say, “yes ma’am, I did.” “Good,” she says, taking another bite.


Marcy –  This novel has an amazing lineup of characters. I would choose Walt for his innocence and love of life. He has down’s syndrome and has been abandoned by his father but has an amazing outlook on life.

“Ready to swim?”

Walt looks up at me with wide-eyed enthusiasm. He’s shirtless now, holding a flashlight and sporting a pair of cutoff daisy dukes. The Cubs hat and the green Chucks he’s still wearing as well as that infectious smile that sets my heart aflame. It’s the same smile my dad and I used when we made waffles, only Walt’s is magnified somehow, like I-don’t-know-what…the Belgian waffle version or something.

“Here,” he says, offering a wad of denim. “My backup pair.”

Hopping down from the boulder, I take the shorts and hold them out in front of me. They’re a little wide in the waist, and far shorter than any shorts I’ve ever worn.

Walt throws his finger in the air, spins on his heels, “This way to my pool!”


4) What is your favorite line or paragraph of description?

Dave – As often happens, Marcy and I choose similar favorite lines. She has chosen one below that I had picked, so I will choose another. I think it’s pretty self-explanatory why I chose this, as it paints a pretty vivid picture.

ED’S PLACE: CHICKEN-N-GAS The image in my brain is unsettling to say the least: Ed, a disgruntled Vietnam vet, stands over a stove with two ashy cigarillos hanging from either side of his mouth; he’s stirring a giant pot of his famous chicken-petroleum soup.

Marcy –  Mim gets wiser as she gets closer to seeing her mom.

I swear, the older I get, the more I value bad examples over good ones. It’s a good thing, too, because most people are egotistical, neurotic, self-absorbed peons, insistent on wearing near-sighted glasses in a far-sighted world. And it’s the exact sort of myopic ignorance that has led to my groundbreaking new theory. I call it Mim’s Theorem of Monkey See Monkey Don’t, and what it boils down to is this: it is my belief that there are some people whose sole purpose of existence is to show the rest of us how not to act.


5) What is your favorite line of dialogue?

Dave – This line of dialogue from Walt, a homeless, mentally disabled young man, made me laugh when I read it. It easily cinched my favorite when I read the end of the novel.

“Yes,” says Walt, going back to his butterfly. “I’ll remember the rendezvouski.”

Marcy –  Words of wisdom from Mim’s mom:

My mother was the greatest alarm clock of all time. Every morning, without fail, she threw back the curtains to let the sun in, and always, she said the same thing.

“Have a vision, Mary, unclouded by fear.”



Congratulations to David for the praise he’s received on this wonderful novel!

 Kids' Indie Next List "Top Ten" Pick (Spring 2015)
 ABA Indies Introduce Debut Authors and New Voices title
 A Junior Library Guild selection
 Publishers Weekly Spring 2015 Flying Start


To read more about David Arnold and his debut novel, Mosquitoland, please go to:



Friday, June 5, 2015

First Friday - Five Favorite Things - Debut Novel Day

by Dave Amaditz and
Marcy Collier


 

Welcome to June’s version of - First Friday - Five Favorite Things - Debut Novel Day. In this monthly series, we ask five simple questions about a debut novel that will hopefully entice anyone reading this post to pick up the novel and read it themselves, and/or give them at a glance some insight into the author's writing style and voice as well as how some of the characters might think or act. We do this by presenting, first, answers to our Five Favorite Things, followed by the author's answers in a follow-up post.

This month we're pleased to highlight debut novelist, Paul Greci and his novel, Surviving Bear Island. Tom is stranded on Bear Island in the Alaskan wilderness during a kayaking trip with his father. When his kayak is overturned, Tom finds himself alone, but quickly finds out that living a solitary life on a remote and deserted island is the least of his fears.

Marcy and I can’t wait for you to join this incredible journey on the island with us.


1) What is your favorite line or paragraph from the novel as it relates to the main character's development and/or growth?

Dave – Tom has been struggling for days to survive on the island. His time alone has given him plenty of time to think of the problems plaguing him, one of which was trying to come to grips with the fact he believes he was responsible for his mother’s death. I like how he learns to accept what he has or has not done. I believe this passage portrays those feelings well.

I knew I had to take care of myself. That no one was going to do anything for me. And when it comes right down to it, you have to rely on yourself. You’ve got to live with yourself and the choices you make.

MarcyThroughout the novel, Tom has a lot of time to reflect on his home life and his problems. This paragraph is poignant and reflects that early on in the novel, the main character has the instinct to survive in bad times both at home and on Bear Island.

After he found out Mom died, he stood in the kitchen and dropped plates, one by one, on the floor until he’d broken them all. Then he took the bowls and did the same thing. I remember telling him to stop, but he acted like I wasn’t even there. I went into my room and cried and cried, and he never came in. When I came out hours later, he was sitting on the couch, and in the kitchen there wasn’t a speck of glass on the floor. I sat down next to him, and he put his arm around me. “We’ll get through this,” he said. But then he didn’t say anything much for months and months.

“I’ll get through this,” I said. “I’ll keep searching for Dad until I find him.” Another shiver ripped through my body.


2) What is your favorite chapter ending or cliffhanger?

Dave - As Marcy mentions below, there were many fantastic cliffhangers, but I chose this one from earlier in the novel while Tom is trying to escape from a bear.

The bear twisted away from me and I jumped backwards. My feet scrambled for grip as my arms reached out for the steep slope. I grabbed a berry bush by the base and it gave way. I fell backwards, like I’d been dumped out of an airplane, and landed on my back with my legs flat, pointing down slope. A sea of green flew over me as I bumped down the slope and gained speed with no sign of stopping.

I let out a scream.

Then my heels hit something that sent a jolt through my hips and all the way to the base of my head. I flopped forward, and all of a sudden I was flying through the air. Everything slowed down, like an instant replay of someone doing a ski jump.

I knew I was moving, was airborne, but felt no pressure-no resistance. Then I slammed into the ground. Face first. Mouth first.

Marcy – There were many intense cliffhangers in the novel. This chapter ending was more about survival and perseverance.

Choices. Life was full of choices. Don’t look back, I told myself. It does no good. I swallowed the last of my jerky and started down the slope in search of a place to camp.


3) Who is your favorite secondary character and why?

Dave – It’s difficult for me to pick a secondary character, as Tom is alone for most of the novel. However, through flashbacks, I got to meet his dad. Tom has vivid recollections of the advice his dad has given, and to Tom’s great fortune, it always comes at a time when he needs it the most, as if his dad is right beside him. Following, is an example.

When you’re wet, the only way to stay warm without a fire or a change of clothes is to keep moving.

or…

The spark’s got to hit some very small, dry flammable material-like dried grass or wood shavings or tiny scraps of birchbark. And then, you’ve got to blow on it and feed it.

Marcy – My favorite character is Mom. Even though Tom’s mom is no longer with him, her spirit is still alive inside of him and the memory of her guides him through his survival on Bear Island. Her easygoing personality and love of life and music shines through in her son.

I know my mom could’ve come up with something better, but she’d be happy that I was making a song. A song with her in mind. “Let the music flow through you,” she’d say. “Play with it. You don’t make mistakes when you make music. You make discoveries.”

There had to be a salmon stream farther back in the bay. Had to be, or else I’d have to cut off some fingers and roast them. Maybe I could work that in.

So the whole thing would go like this:

Wormy blue berries will help.
But alone will only make me yelp.
Like a dog I need more than a treat.
Salmon for the Sentinels can’t be beat.
If I don’t find any, then fingers I’ll eat.


4) What is your favorite line or paragraph of description?

Dave – This section comes from later in the novel while Tom is trying to use his flint to spark a flame, something he has never done, but needs to do, because he has no other resources to start a fire. I can see what he is doing. I can feel it, feel exactly what he is going through. Can’t you?

Come on, I thought. Just this one time. All I need is one flame. I closed my eyes and just kept running the knife up and down the flint. In my mind I saw sparks, or maybe I was seeing images of the real things through my eyelids. Part of me didn’t believe the flint would work, and part of me felt like I was a failure because I had this fire-starting tool and couldn’t get it to work. And all the time I just kept running the knife on the flint, keeping my eyes closed. I could feel the wood shavings brushing my knuckles as my hand moved.

“Fire, fire, fire,” I started singing.

Marcy – This paragraph shows a great deal about how Tom not only blames himself for his mom’s death, but also how he believes his dad blames him as well.

And for that whole first year I thought if Mom was gone I may as well be gone, too. Like I was part of a package deal and now the deal was off. And I thought Dad blamed me for Mom’s death too. I mean, he never told me he did, but he never told me he didn’t. Never. And he was right there when she asked me if I wanted to go on the ride and I chose to practice with my bow instead. The last thing she’d said was: If you’re not going, I’m gonna bike the whole loop.” And later that month my dad burned my bow and target.


5) What is your favorite line of dialogue?

Dave - For me, this line was easy. It’s short, as are most of the things his dad has said, but it tells you everything you need to know about what it will be like for Tom while alone on the island.

“When you are alone in the wilderness, everything is magnified.”

Marcy – Tom often talks to himself since he doesn’t have anyone else. These few lines are so very visual and true.

“Just me now,” I said. “Me and the wild. I’m wild. Part of the wild.”


To read more about Paul Greci’s debut novel, Surviving Bear Island, please go to:

Kirkus Review: “Bear Island is a challenging environment to survive but a terrific thrill on the page. (Adventure. 9-14)”   https://www.kirkusreviews.com/book-reviews/paul-greci/surviving-bear-island/
Junior Library Guild Selection: Surviving Bear Island is a Junior Library Guild Selection in the High Interest Middle Category. https://www.juniorlibraryguild.com/books/view.dT/9780985481094



Friday, May 29, 2015

Keeping Teens and Tweens Safe Online

by Marcy Collier

Ipads and Iphones and tablets oh my!

If you're the parent of a teen, tween and even younger, they have probably
used an electronic device of some kind. Heck, in my son's middle school,
all of the students are issued Chromebooks in the beginning of the school year.
All of their books and most homework is done online. They collaborate with
teachers and other students via email and Google Docs.

My boys are computer savvy, but as a parent I worry. You can't watch them
24/7 and monitor every single document, video and text. I pay attention.
I've had the talk about online predators at least a zillion times. I've even
had my best friend who worked for the Federal Bureau of Investigations in
the division of online Crimes Against Children have several talks with
my older son on her experiences and advice on how to be careful online.

New apps are popping up every day. My advice is to be aware, ask questions
and do surprise checks on all devices. If your children know you'll be checking up
on them, they'll be less likely to post and comment inappropriately online. I always
tell them never to post anything they wouldn't want the world to see.

Here's a link to a great article on protecting your teen!

https://nakedsecurity.sophos.com/2014/11/14/protect-your-teens-7-apps-and-websites-parents-should-be-aware-of/

Friday, April 17, 2015

To Read Ahead or Not?

by Marcy Collier

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My eight-year-old son and I were talking about his day at school. He's the son who makes me work to pull information about his day.

His second grade teacher (who my older son also had) is a voracious reader and tried to read to the class aloud daily. He loves this part of the day because he is also an avid reader. He and I are usually reading several different chapter books together at one time, depending on his bedtime reading preference.

When I asked him what the teacher read in class that day, his eyes lit up as he asked, "Have you ever read The Indian in the Cupboard?"

Being a children's author and enthusiastic reader myself, I said, "No, I actually haven't read that one. Is is good?"

"Oh, Mom, you have to read it." He told me the premise. The boy in the story, Omri, gets a plastic Indian brave for his birthday from his friend Patrick. He puts the Indian in a cupboard and locks it with a strange key that once belonged to his great-grandmother. When he turns the key, the Indian changes from plastic to a real live Indian man.

My son insisted I read the book and asked if we could buy it so he could read ahead of the class. My older son used to do the same thing because he couldn't wait to read what came next. And as a reader myself, I have stayed up most of the night to finish way too many books to name because I just couldn't wait to see what happened next.

When my older son wanted to read ahead, we'd have to make a trip to the library or bookstore, which bought me some time to stay just a wee bit behind where they left off in school.

But now I have a Kindle and a Nook, where I can buy just about any book on the planet instantaneously. What to do?

The reader in me picked up the device that was charged (the Kindle) and within less than a minute, we were reading.

My son is trying hard not to tell me what happens next. He knows how much I enjoy surprises. But I'm usually the one recommending and reading books to him. Ones I've read that he hasn't. It is so much fun for him to share a book that he's read, but I haven't.

Thankfully, even though, we purchased the book right away, we were still able to stay behind the class (who incidentally just finished the book). My son really, really wants to tell me the ending and keeps giving me scenarios and asking me to choose the ending I think will happen.

So the question, do you read ahead of the class or stay slightly behind?

I typically stay slightly behind or on the same chapter. My older son always wanted to finish before the class too. In one book in particular, we were a few chapters ahead of the class, and I thank the stars we were. He was in third grade and had a permanent substitute teacher for the year. She decided to read one of her childhood favorites, Judy Blume's, Superfudge. I like Judy Blume's books. I can remember in middle school passing around someone's older sister's worn copy of Forever (and hiding what we were reading), but I had not read this one. Fortunately, we were a few chapters ahead at home and I saw the foreshadowing of a Christmas scene. I didn't like where it was going, not one bit. See the below link to the reviews of others who felt the same.


http://www.amazon.com/Superfudge-Judy-Blume/product-reviews/0440484332

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That night I emailed the teacher and told her she absolutely had to skip that particular scene or my son and probably at least half of the class would be devastated. Fortunately, she did, and since we were reading this book at home, my son didn't feel the need to take it out of the library and re-read it a third time. And I am thankful we were ahead. Christmas was a month away and wouldn't have been the same for my son or most of those children because the teacher had not read the book ahead of time. She chose this book based on nostalgic memories from her youth. If you're a teacher, you should always read a book before reading it to your students.

So again, thoughts on reading ahead of the class? I have mixed emotions, but I want to know what you think.

Friday, October 3, 2014

First Friday - Five Favorite Things - Debut Novel Day





by Dave Amaditz and
Marcy Collier


One of the best things about fall is snuggling up with a warm glass of apple cider and a great book in front of the fireplace or outside fire pit. If you’re looking for your next terrific debut novel, check out today’s post.

Welcome to October’s version of - First Friday - Five Favorite Things - Debut Novel Day. In this monthly series, we ask five simple questions about a debut novel that will hopefully entice anyone reading this post to pick up the novel and read it themselves, and/or give them at a glance some insight into the author's writing style and voice as well as how some of the characters might think or act. We do this by presenting, first, answers to our Five Favorite Things, followed by the author's answers in a follow-up post.

This month we're pleased to highlight debut YA novelist, Elle Cosimano and her novel, Nearly Gone. Leigh is on target to win the $25,000 scholarship for achieving the highest grade in her chemistry class, her ticket to getting out of the low-class trailers where she lives. One thing stands in her way, a killer set on destroying her.

And we’ve just learned from Elle that today is extra special. She is revealing the cover for book two – Nearly Found, which is slated to come out in June 2015. Congratulations, Elle! You can check out the cover reveal and read more in an article posted today in the Huffington Post.


1) What is your favorite line or paragraph from the novel as it relates to the main character's development and/or growth?

Dave – I think this line of dialogue from Leigh, the main character, captures everything about her that she is and why she acts the way she does.

“When I touch someone, I feel what they feel. I can taste it. I don’t know how or why. I just know I can’t control it. The only way to stop it is not to touch anyone at all. So I don’t. Because it’s too hard to be inside someone’s heart. And that sucks.”

Marcy – Leigh doesn’t know why her father left. She has faith that he had to have a good reason to leave her and her mother behind. And even though he’s been gone for years, she knows or at least hopes that he’ll return to them one day.

“My father wouldn’t have just left. He must have had a reason. And I believed that one day, he’d come back. That it was all some necessary sleight of hand, and he’d turn up like a card in a trick, right back where he was supposed to be.”


2) What is your favorite chapter ending or cliffhanger?

Dave - Leigh has found one of her friends in a dark, deserted room. I’ll say no more as I don’t want to spoil anything about the mystery of the novel, but needless to say a chill or two - - or more, ran up my spine after reading this.

I pushed myself farther into the aisle toward his face, wedging myself between his shoulders and the seats. His glasses hung askew inside a clear plastic bag that clung to the opening of his nostrils and stuck in his mouth. The plastic sucked tight over his face - and I didn’t move. I couldn’t breathe. The bag was knotted at Teddy’s throat, tied with his own shoelace. I reached out to tear it, to rip it away from his face. Breathe, Teddy, breathe! A dark hand shot in front of me before I could reach the bag. A glove clamped over my mouth and I screamed into it.

Marcy – One of my favorite chapter endings in the novel.

At least Jeremy was honest with himself. He never tried to be anyone he wasn’t, accepting each of us for who we were, flaws and all. He was a real friend, not a paid one.

I knew he wouldn’t mind when I asked him to skip lunch to drive me home so I could pretend to be sick for the rest of the day. I knew he’d share half of his sandwich with me on the way.

And we both knew I wouldn’t have anything to give in return.


3) Who is your favorite secondary character and why?

Dave – My favorite secondary character has to be Jeremy because he knows Leigh as well as she knows herself and he was there for her, willing to do anything he could for her, as long as she was willing to accept his help. This line gives an example of how he jokingly proposed to stand up for her.

“Seriously,” he insisted, holstering his pathetic guns. “I’d have challenged him to a spelling bee. Total jock obliteration. I’d have been ruthless in defense of your honor.”

Marcy –  There were so many characters that I really enjoyed, it’s hard to pick one. I guess I would choose Lonny. He is this scary drug dealer guy. You would not want to get on this guy’s bad side. But Leigh stands up to him and he respects her for it. I won’t give you details because it would reveal too much, but there’s a scene at the end of the book where Lonny leaves Leigh a black rose and her bag that she has left behind. This sentiment reveals a lot about Lonny’s character and shows he has a soft side beneath the gruff exterior.


4) What is your favorite line or paragraph of description?

Dave – Okay. So many great ones to choose from. How would you like to run into this guy in a dark alley - - let alone have him as a neighbor? Someone has to let me know.

I jumped at the snap-clink of a lighter flipping shut. Lonny perched on his saggy front porch, elbows on his knees. His tank top was moist at the neck, tattoos blooming like ghosts through the thin white cotton. He squinted at me, reaching slowly behind himself into the waistband of his jeans. He laid something between his legs. The silver barrel glinted in the sun. We stared at each other while he lifted the cigarette to his lips. His exhale felt like a bullet between the eyes.

Marcy – I had a difficult time choosing because of all the terrific descriptions in this novel, but this scene painted a clear, vivid image, and I felt like a spectator in the room. Eric bets Oleksa that he can’t solve the Rubik’s cube in less than ten seconds.

Oleksa caught the cube and his fingers flashed over the surface in quick successive turns, each pass aligning the colors with increasing accuracy. My heart sped up as I counted down in my head.

There’s no way…” Eric clenched his hands, glancing at his money. “The world record is just under seven.”

I rocked forward, inching up on my toes for a better look. The timer looked from Oleksa to his watch. “Five… four… three…”

Oleksa gave the cube a final turn and slammed it down on the desk between them.

“I win,” he said.


5) What is your favorite line of dialogue?

Dave – This line comes from early in the novel from her mother. Pretty much lets us know why Leigh acts and thinks the way she does.

Your education is the only thing you can count on to get you out of this trailer. If I’d spent more time on mine instead of chasing after a boy, neither of us would be here.”

Marcy –  This one line has so many meanings. Love it!

“Just because it’s complicated, doesn’t mean there isn’t a solution.”